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Tuesday, July 31, 2012

WALT make writing interesting.

We are learning to make our writing interesting.

We start with a simple sentence like The cat sat on the mat. We find the nouns. Before every noun we need an adjective to describe the noun. We also need an adverb to help describe the verb. Now we have more words to make our boring sentence much more interesting for the reader.
Our new sentence:
The evil black cat crept cautiously on to the dull grey mat.

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